Mistakes That
Can Change Your Life
The protagonist in Ravens Gate
by Anthony Horowitz has many problems. He was raised in foster care because his
parents died when he was young. Throughout his teenage years he starts to hang
around the wrong type of person. Alex’s friend convinces him to go rob a
warehouse full of electronics and dvds. The day that his parents died he had a
dream of exactly what happened to his parents. On that same morning Alex’s mom
burnt his toast. This may not seem important but it is one of the most
important parts of the story.
When alex was
in the warehouse he smelled burnt toast. The second that the smell reached his
nostrils he knew that something bad was going to happen. He doesn’t know this
now but the key to activating his powers is smelling burnt toast. Immediately
after he smelled the burning a security guard nabbed him. Alex knew that the
moment he agreed to do this it was a bad decision. Alex doesn’t really care
about what he does because he feels his life is messed up enough.
The problem
that Alex has is a similar problem that many teenagers have, hanging out with
the wrong group of people. If you are friends with bad kids it will only lead
to trouble for you down the road. You will end up in the back of a police car.
I am not saying that I’m the best-behaved person in the world. Everyone will
eventually make a mistake that they are not proud of. You just need to learn
from your mistakes and make sure it doesn’t happen again.
I really liked your title. Its a great question that brings the reader to really want to read your story.I also liked your comparison. You really made it feel like this could be you. By reading this i want to do the same with my post
ReplyDeleteReading this post made me think back to my life so so much. I agreed with the part when you said "If you are friends with bad kids it will lead to trouble for you down the road." Reading this sentence made me think about past experience for me and it made me really interested in reading the book! Nice post!
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